What a wonderfully clever story! Well-written, terrific characterizations and a hell of a good read! Just awesome!
Wow !! This was an amazing story !! Really, you are talented !!
The story is original and very brilliant !
your good work !
Excellent! I especially loved that last part with her mother. Marga is Morrighan: perfect! Becker, you've outdown yourself
Thanks for the GREAT end! I loved all the story! It's all surprises and big emotioon since the start till the end. Congradulations!
Lady F Lady K
This was an absolutely wonderful story! I loved it so much! Roxtonus is free and he can be with Marga, I love it! Thank
you for another wonderful and brilliant story. I can't wait for your next one.
The suspense at the end! This was terrific just like your other stories. I can't wait to read your next story. Keep it
Nicely Done Beckers! Is there a hint of a sequel in the making? Sherri
Wow! *sigh* what a wonderful chapter, and a most excellent story. Thanks so much for writing it, Beckers! Sorry to see
it's done, but looking forward to whatever lovely tale you have next for us! :)
OH MY! That was so beautiful when Jon kissed her scars! There was so much love in this simple touch and you almost made
me cry! lol Oh, when he tell her that he love her and need her in his life! Wonderful! You're a very good writer, by your
words we can feel the passion in their touch, the tenderness in their words and the love in their kiss! ;)
That was a
really nice story and a lovely chapter! Great work! I hope that you have inspiration for another fan fic :)
These were great chapters! I adored them! This story is beautifully written, with lots of lovely unexpected twists. I love
the way you ended it!
I loved this story. You are one of my favorite writers. I cannot wait for your next story. Thanks!!
I don't know what else to say but, a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I hope you will be writing more stories soon.